Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Surrender by Symona

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Listen well, all of you, to this bard proclaim the beauty of---

Help me to surrender my heart
To You.
Help me to finally give up
The fierce Flame inside,
That kills and burns
Until all is ash.
I can’t help You,
Because I’ve given my heart
To another less worthy.
I can’t help You
Because the Flame is me.
The Flame inside, though it
Burns my tears
And feeds my fears,
Is keeping me alive.
Take the Sword,
Drive it through,
Until all that’s left
Is You.
I know it will hurt,
I know I will die.
But isn’t it worth it
If I’m whole inside?
I surrender.

The double-edged blade,
Pain, pain, pain!
The lapping of waves…

The Flame is no more,
You’ve settled the score.
The Flame is no more,
You’ve replaced it
With Your heart.
Your heart is whole,
Focused and pure.
Your heart has
Captured me.


Gracie said...

Wow Symona! That was beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

Meredith said...

This poem is phenomenal! Made me cry. Thank you for sharing. God bless.

Jill Stengl said...

This touched my heart too. Thank you!